But there are people who disagree with this idea. They believe that the Internet causes addiction in people and people spend more of their time on the Internet instead of doing useful things. And thatThat makes people obese because they spend hoursehours on the Internet without doing any physical activity. They also believe that there are fake sites tothat deceive people and make money out of it. Many young people spend more time on the Internet than instead of studying, and this reduces the number of students in thea community.
On the other hand, many people believe that with the Internet
, many things have become easier. We get faster news from all over the world throughfaster thanks to the Internet. Those who are studying can get a lot of information throughover the Internet, and even some students cancan even communicate remotely with their teachers. Communication between family and friends is faster and easier, and most importantimportantly, banking and postal service is doneservices are faster and more accuratelyefficient than in the past.
In conclusion, while I accept that the Internet is addictive and makes us less active and overweight
. But the Internet, I also think it can help us do a lot of things faster and easier andmore easily. Moreover, we get to know thereceive news from around the world in much less time than in the past.

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