Dear owner of Welwyn TheatresTheatre,

My name is Jenna Haribat, I am a resident of Welwyn Garden City and a frequent customer of your cinema.
I and myMy friends and I very much enjoy going out toto the movies, and we always recountremember fondly the pleasant times we had inat Welwyn TheatresTheatre.
Lately, I
have noticed that the choices of movies showingshown at your cinema included a rather high number of violent movies.
I would like to draw your attention to the fact that the exposure of youth to violent imagery has been linked with aggressive behaviour according to a great number of studies and statistics.
Some studies even suggest that watching violent images causes changes in the brains of young people; such changes are described as "detrimental". Other studies also suggest that watching violent movies cause young people to become less sensitive to the pain and suffering of others.
As you know, our city is known for its kindness and low crime
rate, and everyone likes to keep it that way. If the crime rate climbs higherincreases, then people will start avoiding the crowded places like the town centre, where your cinema is located, and so it will causethus causing you loss ofto lose business.

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