I have a problem aboutwith extracurricular education. I have two options. FirstThe first is dance lessons and the second is art lessons. You know that I love dancing and itsit's my dream, but in the future I want to go to art collage and thisthese lessons could helpshelp me a lot. II've decided to choose art lessons because now im thinkI'm thinking about my future. and whenWhen I have more free time, I’ll sign up tofor dance lessons too. theThe first class will be on Tuesday and the subject were aboutis our masterpiece. II've decided to take my the best paintings to show it my teacher. I think extracurricular education could help us to improve our skills and passions and meet with people who have similar interestinterests. What do you think about it?think?

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