15 years ago when I was a kid., I was very excited when hearing that we were going for a holiday in Majunga with my cousins. It was a Sunday morning and was the first time that we went on a long journey together. Up until then, we had never had so much fun during a trip, we. We were playing, eating and enjoying our journey. Later, when we arrived, we were exhausted as we fell asleep immediately when we went to bed. The next day, it was a beautiful sunny day, when we woke up, and we were very excited about what we were going to do that day. As expected, our parents took us to the beach. As soon as we arrived, we jumped into the sea, and after that we were playing football. We were spending our 1st day at the beach. Up until the last day of our vacation, we were having so much fun, and it was fantastic. My only regret is that I wish we had more days left together because we had only 5 days of vacation.

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