Video games are only aan activity for mustengaged in by most young people. But,, but some of them spend the majority of their time in front of their screens. For my part, I am against video games.

Unfortunately, video games can become addictive. Players who are unable to cope with
real-life problems can take refuge in the virtual world of video games.

Some video games contain violence. When young people don't go out, sleep little
, and spend all theof their time in front of their console, they live more in athe virtual world, and this can be dangerous forto their mental and alsoas well as physical health.

Video games are dangerous for young people. The problem lies in
the education ofeducating parents who should control what heirtheir children do.

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