On the 11th day of August, one of the few most exciting days of my life, I went to a Kansas City ChiefsChief's football game. The sun was bright, the stadium was loud, and I got the pleasure of sitting close to the field. The game was electric, every time the chiefs did something great you could feel the stadium rumble throughout the whole city. I was so excited during the whole gamegame- I never had a dull moment. I was with my my family. weWe are all smiling and after the game we all went out to eat at the Red Lobster, my favorite restaurant. Which, which made one of the most exciting days of my life, more excitedexciting.

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