The first drawback of watching TV is that it might bring us eyes disordereye disorders and we could have to wear glasses. ItThis is uncomfortable for many people, and I think nobody wantwants to have them. Moreover, our marks could be worse than before, becousebecause it lets usmeans that we have less time for learning. Sometimes young people arebecome addicted with TV.

The first advantage of this form
of relaxation is that we can learn very interesting news when we are watching channelchannels like "The Discovery Channel" or "Animal Planet". It allowallows us to help uslearn and remember interesting things and awakens our curiosity. SecondlySecond, we can spend time with our family whatfamilies, which is hardlyvery important. It couldcan also help our family to befamilies become closer through, for example, watching movies together.

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